You have to look at a photo and than you have to do see, smell,hear,thinking,
You have to use the descriptive tools like verbs,averbs,metaphors,
Thursday, October 31, 2019
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Hi Franics
ReplyDeleteI like how did not added "The boy thowed" You added "The boy chucked"
I also added detail like throw=Chuck
Can you add a names so it's intrasting?
Hello Francis
ReplyDeleteI like the descriptive tools you have used like I see the water rushing to me. but it does not make sentence like I can see the boy flinging to the boy with the orange it does not make sentence so please fix that. What type of water is rushing to you like a waterfall river sea? From Xavier RM 3 STB.