Hay blogers this is my reading story map.
During reading time we read a story. Our group read story The Hopeville book of records.
We had to write out the characters,setting,outcome and actions in a story. Mason was trying to put on the most pants but he could do it but her friend Katy won the whole thing and she was happy but mason was sad when he done hie one.Miss Spencer she was the teacher and her record was trying to do the most bops but she had 21 but the ather girl got 100. It was in a community hall and some people went there to get the most records.The characters are Katy, Mason,Miss Spenser and the feelings were sad and happy.
I find the story easy but a little easy.
Can you see if I put in capitl letter and put the right words I would maybe feel happy.
To: Fransis,
ReplyDeleteI like that you added deatail about each person.
I also did a story web.
How about adding more detail in the squares in the settings and the fellings.
You did put capitil letters.
From Johann.
Hi Francis
ReplyDeleteI like the detail about the discribeing who won or did not win.
I reminds me about contest when I was six years old.
Can you put in the titles for each element so I know what each box is talking about?
from Nash
Hi Francis
ReplyDeleteI like that you add some detail on your writing and not just a sentence.
I also did the same thing as you and my one was about the last strow.
Can you add more detail about how the charters fell and why do they feel like that.